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教学目标:

1.      让学生巩固本学期(上)所学的核心词汇、句型(在翻译中体现出来);

2.      要求学生熟练掌握综合语法知识,并灵活运用;

3.      要求学生正确分析句子的结构;

4.      提高阅读多篇短文,提高学生的综合能力;

 

教学过程:

一、语法填空:(错误率高)

21 But then they saw the scene: the boy scouts surrounding a hiker who ______ (take) a scary six-meter drop in an area near the Hoover Dam.

分析:词句考查了动词的谓语(时态、语态),根据句意,词句应该用过去完成时,表示过去的过去。但通过分析,很多同学只用了过去式(took)。统计下来,全班只有2位同学用了had taken

答案had taken  

34The wedding party is walking through the aisle of the church as the Wedding March ______(play).

分析:词句考查了as 引导的时间状语从句的时态,解释为:一边。。。,一边。但很多同学没能掌握在此句中它的时态;且没有正确运用它的语态;(正确率为0

答案is being played

补充语法填空

2016年上海崇明区高考英语二模

 

Section A

Directions: After reading the passages below, fill in the blanks to make the passages coherent and grammatically correct. For the blanks with a given word, fill in each blank with the proper form of the given word; for the other blanks, use one word that best fits each blank.

(A)

Happiness Is an Attitude

The 92-year-old confident and proud lady, who is fully dressed each morning by eight o’clock, with her hair fashionably combed and makeup perfectly applied, (25)_____ _____ she’s legally blind, moved to a nursing home today.

Her husband of 70 years recently passed away, (26)_____ (make) the move necessary.

After many hours of waiting patiently in the hall of the nursing home, she (27)_____ (smile) sweetly when told her room was ready. As she got into the elevator (28)_____ her wheelchair, I provided a description of her tiny room.

“I love it,” she started with the enthusiasm of (29)_____ eight-year-old child having just been presented with a new dog.

“Mrs. Jones, you haven’t seen the room…just wait.”

“That has (30)_____ to do with it,” she replied. “Happiness is something you decide on ahead of time. (31)_____ I like my room or not doesn’t depend on how the furniture is arranged…it’s how I arrange my mind. I already decided to love it. It’s a decision I make every morning when I wake up. I have a choice; I can spend the day in bed recounting the difficulty I have with the parts of my body (32)_____ no longer work or get out of bed and be thankful for the ones working. Each day is a gift, and (33)_____ _____ _____ my eyes open, I’ll focus on the new day and all the happy memories I’ve stored away…just for this time in my life.”

二、翻译(典型错误)

81题:学校斥巨资用电子白板取代了传统的黑板。(replace)

分析:考核replace的用法:replace B with A . 学生翻译成replace A with B ,动宾与介宾的位置颠倒。

     “斥巨资”很多同学用了chinese Englishuse……to do;

      电子的:electronic   很多同学运用electricelectrical

答案:The school spends a large amount of money replacing the traditional blackboards with whiteboards.

拓展:replace B with A   substitute A with B  electricity electric

措施加强词汇的背诵, 并且需要反复操练;

 

 67题:学校要求学生每学期参加不同类型的活动,这有助于他们全面发展。(require)

分析:考核require的用法:require sb. to do sth.;   require doing ;   require that…….同时,也考核了enable sb. to do; 对于复合句的考核,考察了非限制定语从句;

答案:The school requires students to participate in different kinds of activities every term , which enables them to develop physically and mentally.

拓展:be worthy to be done/ of being done ;   

措施加强词汇的背诵, 并且需要反复操练

翻译补充练习:(ppt)

2016年上海崇明区高考英语二模

I. Translation

Directions: Translate the following sentences into English, using the words given in the brackets.

1. 出国对于这个高中生来讲根本没有吸引力。(appeal)

2. 尽管我们无法预测将来会发生什么事,但我们可以未雨绸缪。(plan)

3. 这个明年将竣工的游乐园可为当地创造5万个新职位。(entertainment)

4. 你们俩若要合作,必须清楚地意识到你们不可能改变对方的个性而应学着相互尊重。(aware)

5. 不但政府应该制定政策防止进一步污染,而且每个公民都该责无旁贷地保护环境。(Not only)

参考答案:

I. Translation(共22分)

1. Going abroad doesn’t appeal to the senior high school student at all. (1+2+1)

2. While/Although/Though we can’t predict what will happen in the future, we can plan ahead. 1+1+1+1

3. The entertainment park to be completed next year can create 50,000 new jobs for the local area. (2+1+1)

4. If you two want to cooperate, you must be clearly aware that you can’t change the personality of the other but should learn to respect each other. (1+1+3)

5. Not only should the government make policies to prevent further pollution, but also every citizen should take full responsibility for protecting the environment. (1+1+1+2)

 

三、完型填空(典型错误)

43. _____ ,what other animals need from us is being free from duties to us.

    A. Indeed   B. Moreover   C. Nevertheless    D. Otherwise

   分析:这道题的四个选项为adv, 需要根据上下文的意思与语境,选出正确的选项;但很多同学不能正确理解这一段落的意思,故无法做出正确选择;得分率很低。

   答案:A

 

48. Why should humans cause ______ to other beings when it’s necessary.

    A. conflict   B. confusion   C. isolation   D. misery

分析:四个答案对很多同学来说,都是生词;A为冲突为困惑 C为隔离 D为痛苦;根据句意,答案为D.

 

四、回家作业:

1.       整理相关笔记;

2.       完成补充的选择题与翻译;